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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.



"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"










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  • Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.



"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"










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  • Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
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    12 hours ago








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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.



"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"










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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.



"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"







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  • Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
    – Duckisaduckisaduck
    12 hours ago








  • 1




    I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
    – GEdgar
    12 hours ago


















  • Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
    – Duckisaduckisaduck
    12 hours ago








  • 1




    I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
    – GEdgar
    12 hours ago
















Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago






Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago






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1




I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
12 hours ago




I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
12 hours ago










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cut through. Vocabulary.com



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travel across or pass over




As in:




"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".







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    Shouldn't that be ahead ?
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  • stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago










  • @Jeeped - noted and corrected
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • @PeterShor noted and edited
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago




















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cut through. Vocabulary.com



v




travel across or pass over




As in:




"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".







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    Shouldn't that be ahead ?
    – Jeeped
    12 hours ago










  • stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago










  • @Jeeped - noted and corrected
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • @PeterShor noted and edited
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago


















1














cut through. Vocabulary.com



v




travel across or pass over




As in:




"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".







share|improve this answer



















  • 1




    Shouldn't that be ahead ?
    – Jeeped
    12 hours ago










  • stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago










  • @Jeeped - noted and corrected
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • @PeterShor noted and edited
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago
















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cut through. Vocabulary.com



v




travel across or pass over




As in:




"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".







share|improve this answer














cut through. Vocabulary.com



v




travel across or pass over




As in:




"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".








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answered 12 hours ago









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  • 1




    Shouldn't that be ahead ?
    – Jeeped
    12 hours ago










  • stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago










  • @Jeeped - noted and corrected
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • @PeterShor noted and edited
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago
















  • 1




    Shouldn't that be ahead ?
    – Jeeped
    12 hours ago










  • stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago










  • @Jeeped - noted and corrected
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • @PeterShor noted and edited
    – lbf
    12 hours ago










  • Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
    – Peter Shor
    12 hours ago










1




1




Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago




Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago












stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago




stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago












@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago




@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago












@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago




@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago












Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago






Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago





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