Revising a sentence to make it more clear
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I'm making revisions on a book from an archaeological museum. As I was reading through, this sentence stroke me as a bit odd and I need your help correcting it. Pottery shaped as horses, ducks, boats, wheels, horns, houses, and shoes were excavated from Silla burials, as were vessels with human and animal figurines attached and pottery with geomatric designs. I'm not quite sure what the author meant by as were vessels with human and animal figurines attached and pottery with geometric designs. Here's a revision I made: "Pottery shaped as horses, ducks, boats, wheels, horns, houses, and shoes were excavated from Silla burials, so were vessels with human and animal figurines attached and pottery with geometric designs." My question is: Is the original sentence gram...