is this sentence correct with cut through? [on hold]
I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.
"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"
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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.
"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"
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Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.
"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"
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I try make a sentence because i am not a native speaker. So I wonder is it right. I am very appreciate any suggestions.
"When I drive to my driveway. Suddenly, a cat cuts through a head of my car. I try to avoid him and my car was broken down"
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grammar
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Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago
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I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
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Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago
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I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
12 hours ago
Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago
Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago
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1
I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
12 hours ago
I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
12 hours ago
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cut through. Vocabulary.com
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travel across or pass over
As in:
"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".
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Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
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active
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cut through. Vocabulary.com
v
travel across or pass over
As in:
"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".
1
Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
|
show 3 more comments
cut through. Vocabulary.com
v
travel across or pass over
As in:
"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".
1
Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
|
show 3 more comments
cut through. Vocabulary.com
v
travel across or pass over
As in:
"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".
cut through. Vocabulary.com
v
travel across or pass over
As in:
"As I drive into my driveway, suddenly a cat cuts through ahead
of my car. I try to avoid him and my car stalls/stops/breaks down." or "and my car collides with the animal".
edited 11 hours ago
answered 12 hours ago


lbf
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Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
|
show 3 more comments
1
Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
1
1
Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
Shouldn't that be ahead ?
– Jeeped
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
stall is almost certainly the wrong word here.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@Jeeped - noted and corrected
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
@PeterShor noted and edited
– lbf
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
Actually, I think the OP means that his car hits something. Swerving doesn't usually make a car stall, but it can easily make it bump into something.
– Peter Shor
12 hours ago
|
show 3 more comments
Just a suggestion, but "ahead" is one word in Brit. Eng. usually. Except in horror writing.
– Duckisaduckisaduck
12 hours ago
1
I think you will get much better help in ell.stackexchange.com than you will here.
– GEdgar
12 hours ago