Can I say “He cries when slapped by his friend”





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  • It's grammatically correct, but idiomatically unlikely in most contexts.
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  • Are you talking about a one-off action or an habitual one?
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  • It’s in the passive voice—readers much prefer the active voice: “He cries when his friend slaps him.”
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  • It's grammatically correct, but idiomatically unlikely in most contexts.
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  • It's grammatically correct, but idiomatically unlikely in most contexts.
    – FumbleFingers
    Sep 20 at 12:43










  • Are you talking about a one-off action or an habitual one?
    – BoldBen
    Sep 21 at 21:37










  • It’s in the passive voice—readers much prefer the active voice: “He cries when his friend slaps him.”
    – user320354
    Oct 21 at 17:44




















  • It's grammatically correct, but idiomatically unlikely in most contexts.
    – FumbleFingers
    Sep 20 at 12:43










  • Are you talking about a one-off action or an habitual one?
    – BoldBen
    Sep 21 at 21:37










  • It’s in the passive voice—readers much prefer the active voice: “He cries when his friend slaps him.”
    – user320354
    Oct 21 at 17:44


















It's grammatically correct, but idiomatically unlikely in most contexts.
– FumbleFingers
Sep 20 at 12:43




It's grammatically correct, but idiomatically unlikely in most contexts.
– FumbleFingers
Sep 20 at 12:43












Are you talking about a one-off action or an habitual one?
– BoldBen
Sep 21 at 21:37




Are you talking about a one-off action or an habitual one?
– BoldBen
Sep 21 at 21:37












It’s in the passive voice—readers much prefer the active voice: “He cries when his friend slaps him.”
– user320354
Oct 21 at 17:44






It’s in the passive voice—readers much prefer the active voice: “He cries when his friend slaps him.”
– user320354
Oct 21 at 17:44












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It's fine grammatically; you can interpret it in either of two ways:
(a) a narrative - say, as part of a story ("When Charlie isn't looking he takes the fruit. He cries when slapped by his friend. He returns the fruit.");
(b) as a type of (zero) condtional, equivalent to 'He cries whenever he is slapped by his friend'.



Suggested grammar topics: conditionals (especially the zero conditional); ellipsis (that is, the rules for omitting "he is" in the original sentence); the passive (his friend slaps him -> he is slapped by his friend)






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    It's fine grammatically; you can interpret it in either of two ways:
    (a) a narrative - say, as part of a story ("When Charlie isn't looking he takes the fruit. He cries when slapped by his friend. He returns the fruit.");
    (b) as a type of (zero) condtional, equivalent to 'He cries whenever he is slapped by his friend'.



    Suggested grammar topics: conditionals (especially the zero conditional); ellipsis (that is, the rules for omitting "he is" in the original sentence); the passive (his friend slaps him -> he is slapped by his friend)






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      It's fine grammatically; you can interpret it in either of two ways:
      (a) a narrative - say, as part of a story ("When Charlie isn't looking he takes the fruit. He cries when slapped by his friend. He returns the fruit.");
      (b) as a type of (zero) condtional, equivalent to 'He cries whenever he is slapped by his friend'.



      Suggested grammar topics: conditionals (especially the zero conditional); ellipsis (that is, the rules for omitting "he is" in the original sentence); the passive (his friend slaps him -> he is slapped by his friend)






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        It's fine grammatically; you can interpret it in either of two ways:
        (a) a narrative - say, as part of a story ("When Charlie isn't looking he takes the fruit. He cries when slapped by his friend. He returns the fruit.");
        (b) as a type of (zero) condtional, equivalent to 'He cries whenever he is slapped by his friend'.



        Suggested grammar topics: conditionals (especially the zero conditional); ellipsis (that is, the rules for omitting "he is" in the original sentence); the passive (his friend slaps him -> he is slapped by his friend)






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        It's fine grammatically; you can interpret it in either of two ways:
        (a) a narrative - say, as part of a story ("When Charlie isn't looking he takes the fruit. He cries when slapped by his friend. He returns the fruit.");
        (b) as a type of (zero) condtional, equivalent to 'He cries whenever he is slapped by his friend'.



        Suggested grammar topics: conditionals (especially the zero conditional); ellipsis (that is, the rules for omitting "he is" in the original sentence); the passive (his friend slaps him -> he is slapped by his friend)







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