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I wrote the following sentence, but I doubt "World population growth" and "increased demands" are correct.
please help me with the correction.
World population growth and increased demands have been changing the patterns of energy consumption"
present-perfect perfect-aspect
asked Nov 16 at 12:09
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put on hold as off-topic by RegDwigнt♦ Nov 16 at 12:13
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I wrote the following sentence, but I doubt "World population growth" and "increased demands" are correct.
please help me with the correction.
World population growth and increased demands have been changing the patterns of energy consumption"
present-perfect perfect-aspect
asked Nov 16 at 12:09
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put on hold as off-topic by RegDwigнt♦ Nov 16 at 12:13
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – RegDwigнt
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
You need a more descriptive title than that. The site is full of questions about grammar and words. If you're happy with the present perfect continuous construction then eliminate the bold bits.
– Mari-Lou A
Nov 16 at 12:25
The revised question is better, but you should still elaborate on why you think "World population growth" and "increased demands" may not be correct.
– J.R.
Nov 16 at 12:33
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I wrote the following sentence, but I doubt "World population growth" and "increased demands" are correct.
please help me with the correction.
World population growth and increased demands have been changing the patterns of energy consumption"
present-perfect perfect-aspect
asked Nov 16 at 12:09
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I wrote the following sentence, but I doubt "World population growth" and "increased demands" are correct.
please help me with the correction.
World population growth and increased demands have been changing the patterns of energy consumption"
present-perfect perfect-aspect
present-perfect perfect-aspect
asked Nov 16 at 12:09
mahdi
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asked Nov 16 at 12:09
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edited Nov 16 at 12:22
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asked Nov 16 at 12:09
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asked Nov 16 at 12:09
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put on hold as off-topic by RegDwigнt♦ Nov 16 at 12:13
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – RegDwigнt
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
put on hold as off-topic by RegDwigнt♦ Nov 16 at 12:13
This question appears to be off-topic. The users who voted to close gave this specific reason:
- "Proofreading questions are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified." – RegDwigнt
If this question can be reworded to fit the rules in the help center, please edit the question.
You need a more descriptive title than that. The site is full of questions about grammar and words. If you're happy with the present perfect continuous construction then eliminate the bold bits.
– Mari-Lou A
Nov 16 at 12:25
The revised question is better, but you should still elaborate on why you think "World population growth" and "increased demands" may not be correct.
– J.R.
Nov 16 at 12:33
add a comment |
You need a more descriptive title than that. The site is full of questions about grammar and words. If you're happy with the present perfect continuous construction then eliminate the bold bits.
– Mari-Lou A
Nov 16 at 12:25
The revised question is better, but you should still elaborate on why you think "World population growth" and "increased demands" may not be correct.
– J.R.
Nov 16 at 12:33
You need a more descriptive title than that. The site is full of questions about grammar and words. If you're happy with the present perfect continuous construction then eliminate the bold bits.
– Mari-Lou A
Nov 16 at 12:25
You need a more descriptive title than that. The site is full of questions about grammar and words. If you're happy with the present perfect continuous construction then eliminate the bold bits.
– Mari-Lou A
Nov 16 at 12:25
The revised question is better, but you should still elaborate on why you think "World population growth" and "increased demands" may not be correct.
– J.R.
Nov 16 at 12:33
The revised question is better, but you should still elaborate on why you think "World population growth" and "increased demands" may not be correct.
– J.R.
Nov 16 at 12:33
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You need a more descriptive title than that. The site is full of questions about grammar and words. If you're happy with the present perfect continuous construction then eliminate the bold bits.
– Mari-Lou A
Nov 16 at 12:25
The revised question is better, but you should still elaborate on why you think "World population growth" and "increased demands" may not be correct.
– J.R.
Nov 16 at 12:33