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I have created a product which is based on a lot of studies and books. In the user manual of my product I want to let the reader know that he can visit my website to find more information on all the studies and books that the product is based on. How can I explain this in 1 sentence without sounding "Non-native"...??
At the moment I have:
Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on.
Which I don't really like. It does not sound really good.
Would really appreciate your help. Thank you so much! Please let me know if you have questions or need clarification.
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I have created a product which is based on a lot of studies and books. In the user manual of my product I want to let the reader know that he can visit my website to find more information on all the studies and books that the product is based on. How can I explain this in 1 sentence without sounding "Non-native"...??
At the moment I have:
Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on.
Which I don't really like. It does not sound really good.
Would really appreciate your help. Thank you so much! Please let me know if you have questions or need clarification.
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I am not entirely sure what the question is. Could you ask a simple question to get an answer that might help you?
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 20:17
aha...ok...the question is how would a native english speaker phrase the following sentence: "Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on."
– Pat_B
Nov 23 at 21:16
You should rewrite the question, stating your specific concerns with what you have now - not a general concern.
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 22:29
Why do you not like the version you have now? Why do you not think it sounds good? Sounds perfectly fine to me.
– Janus Bahs Jacquet
Nov 23 at 22:57
Hi Pat, welcome to English Language & Usage. Proofreading questions ("Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this passage?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. :-)
– Chappo
Nov 24 at 2:15
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I have created a product which is based on a lot of studies and books. In the user manual of my product I want to let the reader know that he can visit my website to find more information on all the studies and books that the product is based on. How can I explain this in 1 sentence without sounding "Non-native"...??
At the moment I have:
Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on.
Which I don't really like. It does not sound really good.
Would really appreciate your help. Thank you so much! Please let me know if you have questions or need clarification.
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asked Nov 23 at 18:44
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I have created a product which is based on a lot of studies and books. In the user manual of my product I want to let the reader know that he can visit my website to find more information on all the studies and books that the product is based on. How can I explain this in 1 sentence without sounding "Non-native"...??
At the moment I have:
Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on.
Which I don't really like. It does not sound really good.
Would really appreciate your help. Thank you so much! Please let me know if you have questions or need clarification.
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I am not entirely sure what the question is. Could you ask a simple question to get an answer that might help you?
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 20:17
aha...ok...the question is how would a native english speaker phrase the following sentence: "Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on."
– Pat_B
Nov 23 at 21:16
You should rewrite the question, stating your specific concerns with what you have now - not a general concern.
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 22:29
Why do you not like the version you have now? Why do you not think it sounds good? Sounds perfectly fine to me.
– Janus Bahs Jacquet
Nov 23 at 22:57
Hi Pat, welcome to English Language & Usage. Proofreading questions ("Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this passage?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. :-)
– Chappo
Nov 24 at 2:15
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I am not entirely sure what the question is. Could you ask a simple question to get an answer that might help you?
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 20:17
aha...ok...the question is how would a native english speaker phrase the following sentence: "Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on."
– Pat_B
Nov 23 at 21:16
You should rewrite the question, stating your specific concerns with what you have now - not a general concern.
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 22:29
Why do you not like the version you have now? Why do you not think it sounds good? Sounds perfectly fine to me.
– Janus Bahs Jacquet
Nov 23 at 22:57
Hi Pat, welcome to English Language & Usage. Proofreading questions ("Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this passage?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. :-)
– Chappo
Nov 24 at 2:15
I am not entirely sure what the question is. Could you ask a simple question to get an answer that might help you?
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 20:17
I am not entirely sure what the question is. Could you ask a simple question to get an answer that might help you?
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 20:17
aha...ok...the question is how would a native english speaker phrase the following sentence: "Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on."
– Pat_B
Nov 23 at 21:16
aha...ok...the question is how would a native english speaker phrase the following sentence: "Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on."
– Pat_B
Nov 23 at 21:16
You should rewrite the question, stating your specific concerns with what you have now - not a general concern.
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 22:29
You should rewrite the question, stating your specific concerns with what you have now - not a general concern.
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 22:29
Why do you not like the version you have now? Why do you not think it sounds good? Sounds perfectly fine to me.
– Janus Bahs Jacquet
Nov 23 at 22:57
Why do you not like the version you have now? Why do you not think it sounds good? Sounds perfectly fine to me.
– Janus Bahs Jacquet
Nov 23 at 22:57
Hi Pat, welcome to English Language & Usage. Proofreading questions ("Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this passage?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. :-)
– Chappo
Nov 24 at 2:15
Hi Pat, welcome to English Language & Usage. Proofreading questions ("Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this passage?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. :-)
– Chappo
Nov 24 at 2:15
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I am not entirely sure what the question is. Could you ask a simple question to get an answer that might help you?
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 20:17
aha...ok...the question is how would a native english speaker phrase the following sentence: "Visit www.XYZ.com for more information on the literature and studies that this product is based on."
– Pat_B
Nov 23 at 21:16
You should rewrite the question, stating your specific concerns with what you have now - not a general concern.
– J. Taylor
Nov 23 at 22:29
Why do you not like the version you have now? Why do you not think it sounds good? Sounds perfectly fine to me.
– Janus Bahs Jacquet
Nov 23 at 22:57
Hi Pat, welcome to English Language & Usage. Proofreading questions ("Is this correct?", "Is there a better way to write this passage?") are off-topic unless a specific source of concern in the text is clearly identified. For further guidance, see How to Ask and take the Tour. :-)
– Chappo
Nov 24 at 2:15