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How can I reduce the amount of if statements in this program to make it more robust and any other tips for improvement would be grateful.



# importing pickle
import pickle

# defining variables
create_username = 0
create_password = 0
password = 0
username = 0

# this variable allows the user or denies the user to the rest of the program (will only run if access is 1)
access = 0


# creates a users dictionary
with open('users.pickle', 'rb') as f:
users = pickle.load(f)

print(users)

# sign up (creating new account)
while username not in users and username != 'signup':
username = input("enter username(type signup to create an account): ")

# add new user to dictionary
if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":
create_username = input("enter a new username: ")
create_password = input("enter a new password (Your password cannot be the same as your username !!!!!!!): ")

if create_password in users:
create_password = input("password taken re-enter: ")
# then adds the new username to the users dictionary
if username == 'signup':
users[create_username] = create_password

if username in users:
password = input("enter password: ")

if password in users:
print("access granted")

access = 1
if username not in users and username != 'signup':
username = input("enter username: ")

if username in users:
password = input("enter password")

if password in users:
print("access granted")
access = 1

if password not in users:
print("access denied")

with open('users.pickle', 'wb') as f:
# Pickle the 'data' dictionary using the highest protocol available.
pickle.dump(users, f, pickle.HIGHEST_PROTOCOL)

print(users)









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    # importing pickle
    import pickle

    # defining variables
    create_username = 0
    create_password = 0
    password = 0
    username = 0

    # this variable allows the user or denies the user to the rest of the program (will only run if access is 1)
    access = 0


    # creates a users dictionary
    with open('users.pickle', 'rb') as f:
    users = pickle.load(f)

    print(users)

    # sign up (creating new account)
    while username not in users and username != 'signup':
    username = input("enter username(type signup to create an account): ")

    # add new user to dictionary
    if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":
    create_username = input("enter a new username: ")
    create_password = input("enter a new password (Your password cannot be the same as your username !!!!!!!): ")

    if create_password in users:
    create_password = input("password taken re-enter: ")
    # then adds the new username to the users dictionary
    if username == 'signup':
    users[create_username] = create_password

    if username in users:
    password = input("enter password: ")

    if password in users:
    print("access granted")

    access = 1
    if username not in users and username != 'signup':
    username = input("enter username: ")

    if username in users:
    password = input("enter password")

    if password in users:
    print("access granted")
    access = 1

    if password not in users:
    print("access denied")

    with open('users.pickle', 'wb') as f:
    # Pickle the 'data' dictionary using the highest protocol available.
    pickle.dump(users, f, pickle.HIGHEST_PROTOCOL)

    print(users)









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      # importing pickle
      import pickle

      # defining variables
      create_username = 0
      create_password = 0
      password = 0
      username = 0

      # this variable allows the user or denies the user to the rest of the program (will only run if access is 1)
      access = 0


      # creates a users dictionary
      with open('users.pickle', 'rb') as f:
      users = pickle.load(f)

      print(users)

      # sign up (creating new account)
      while username not in users and username != 'signup':
      username = input("enter username(type signup to create an account): ")

      # add new user to dictionary
      if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":
      create_username = input("enter a new username: ")
      create_password = input("enter a new password (Your password cannot be the same as your username !!!!!!!): ")

      if create_password in users:
      create_password = input("password taken re-enter: ")
      # then adds the new username to the users dictionary
      if username == 'signup':
      users[create_username] = create_password

      if username in users:
      password = input("enter password: ")

      if password in users:
      print("access granted")

      access = 1
      if username not in users and username != 'signup':
      username = input("enter username: ")

      if username in users:
      password = input("enter password")

      if password in users:
      print("access granted")
      access = 1

      if password not in users:
      print("access denied")

      with open('users.pickle', 'wb') as f:
      # Pickle the 'data' dictionary using the highest protocol available.
      pickle.dump(users, f, pickle.HIGHEST_PROTOCOL)

      print(users)









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      How can I reduce the amount of if statements in this program to make it more robust and any other tips for improvement would be grateful.



      # importing pickle
      import pickle

      # defining variables
      create_username = 0
      create_password = 0
      password = 0
      username = 0

      # this variable allows the user or denies the user to the rest of the program (will only run if access is 1)
      access = 0


      # creates a users dictionary
      with open('users.pickle', 'rb') as f:
      users = pickle.load(f)

      print(users)

      # sign up (creating new account)
      while username not in users and username != 'signup':
      username = input("enter username(type signup to create an account): ")

      # add new user to dictionary
      if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":
      create_username = input("enter a new username: ")
      create_password = input("enter a new password (Your password cannot be the same as your username !!!!!!!): ")

      if create_password in users:
      create_password = input("password taken re-enter: ")
      # then adds the new username to the users dictionary
      if username == 'signup':
      users[create_username] = create_password

      if username in users:
      password = input("enter password: ")

      if password in users:
      print("access granted")

      access = 1
      if username not in users and username != 'signup':
      username = input("enter username: ")

      if username in users:
      password = input("enter password")

      if password in users:
      print("access granted")
      access = 1

      if password not in users:
      print("access denied")

      with open('users.pickle', 'wb') as f:
      # Pickle the 'data' dictionary using the highest protocol available.
      pickle.dump(users, f, pickle.HIGHEST_PROTOCOL)

      print(users)






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          # importing pickle


          Obviously. Don't clutter your code with comments unless they add something we don't already know.



          # defining variables
          create_username = 0
          create_password = 0
          password = 0
          username = 0


          This is generally a bad idea, and you aren't in mid-1990s C. Don't predeclare your variables. Initialize them where they're actually used.



          print(users)


          If users is a plain-old dictionary, I recommend the use of pprint instead of print.



          "enter username(type signup to create an account): "


          This is called in-band control, and is a bad idea. What if someone's username is called "signup"? You want out-of-band control. Ask explicitly whether the user wants to sign up or log in.



          if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":


          Don't do two comparisons. Convert username to lowercase and compare with 'signup'.






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            # importing pickle


            Obviously. Don't clutter your code with comments unless they add something we don't already know.



            # defining variables
            create_username = 0
            create_password = 0
            password = 0
            username = 0


            This is generally a bad idea, and you aren't in mid-1990s C. Don't predeclare your variables. Initialize them where they're actually used.



            print(users)


            If users is a plain-old dictionary, I recommend the use of pprint instead of print.



            "enter username(type signup to create an account): "


            This is called in-band control, and is a bad idea. What if someone's username is called "signup"? You want out-of-band control. Ask explicitly whether the user wants to sign up or log in.



            if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":


            Don't do two comparisons. Convert username to lowercase and compare with 'signup'.






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              # importing pickle


              Obviously. Don't clutter your code with comments unless they add something we don't already know.



              # defining variables
              create_username = 0
              create_password = 0
              password = 0
              username = 0


              This is generally a bad idea, and you aren't in mid-1990s C. Don't predeclare your variables. Initialize them where they're actually used.



              print(users)


              If users is a plain-old dictionary, I recommend the use of pprint instead of print.



              "enter username(type signup to create an account): "


              This is called in-band control, and is a bad idea. What if someone's username is called "signup"? You want out-of-band control. Ask explicitly whether the user wants to sign up or log in.



              if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":


              Don't do two comparisons. Convert username to lowercase and compare with 'signup'.






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                # importing pickle


                Obviously. Don't clutter your code with comments unless they add something we don't already know.



                # defining variables
                create_username = 0
                create_password = 0
                password = 0
                username = 0


                This is generally a bad idea, and you aren't in mid-1990s C. Don't predeclare your variables. Initialize them where they're actually used.



                print(users)


                If users is a plain-old dictionary, I recommend the use of pprint instead of print.



                "enter username(type signup to create an account): "


                This is called in-band control, and is a bad idea. What if someone's username is called "signup"? You want out-of-band control. Ask explicitly whether the user wants to sign up or log in.



                if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":


                Don't do two comparisons. Convert username to lowercase and compare with 'signup'.






                share|improve this answer












                # importing pickle


                Obviously. Don't clutter your code with comments unless they add something we don't already know.



                # defining variables
                create_username = 0
                create_password = 0
                password = 0
                username = 0


                This is generally a bad idea, and you aren't in mid-1990s C. Don't predeclare your variables. Initialize them where they're actually used.



                print(users)


                If users is a plain-old dictionary, I recommend the use of pprint instead of print.



                "enter username(type signup to create an account): "


                This is called in-band control, and is a bad idea. What if someone's username is called "signup"? You want out-of-band control. Ask explicitly whether the user wants to sign up or log in.



                if username == "signup" or username == "Signup":


                Don't do two comparisons. Convert username to lowercase and compare with 'signup'.







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