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Devin passed him, his shoulder skidding across the side of the smaller boy's head.



Devin passed him, and his shoulder skidded across the side of the smaller boy's head.










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  • "skidding" is not present tense. "Is skidding" would be present progressive, but that's not what your first sentence says.
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Devin passed him, his shoulder skidding across the side of the smaller boy's head.



Devin passed him, and his shoulder skidded across the side of the smaller boy's head.







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  • "skidding" is not present tense. "Is skidding" would be present progressive, but that's not what your first sentence says.
    – Mark Beadles
    Nov 19 at 2:45


















  • "skidding" is not present tense. "Is skidding" would be present progressive, but that's not what your first sentence says.
    – Mark Beadles
    Nov 19 at 2:45
















"skidding" is not present tense. "Is skidding" would be present progressive, but that's not what your first sentence says.
– Mark Beadles
Nov 19 at 2:45




"skidding" is not present tense. "Is skidding" would be present progressive, but that's not what your first sentence says.
– Mark Beadles
Nov 19 at 2:45










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Yep, both are correct. They each mean the same thing. They even suggest the same sense of time. The choice is a stylistic one.



People speaking casually are more likely to use the second pattern (possibly a witness telling an authority figure about an incident). The first is slightly more crafted (possibly a novelist building out a vignette).






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    Yep, both are correct. They each mean the same thing. They even suggest the same sense of time. The choice is a stylistic one.



    People speaking casually are more likely to use the second pattern (possibly a witness telling an authority figure about an incident). The first is slightly more crafted (possibly a novelist building out a vignette).






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      Yep, both are correct. They each mean the same thing. They even suggest the same sense of time. The choice is a stylistic one.



      People speaking casually are more likely to use the second pattern (possibly a witness telling an authority figure about an incident). The first is slightly more crafted (possibly a novelist building out a vignette).






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        Yep, both are correct. They each mean the same thing. They even suggest the same sense of time. The choice is a stylistic one.



        People speaking casually are more likely to use the second pattern (possibly a witness telling an authority figure about an incident). The first is slightly more crafted (possibly a novelist building out a vignette).






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        Yep, both are correct. They each mean the same thing. They even suggest the same sense of time. The choice is a stylistic one.



        People speaking casually are more likely to use the second pattern (possibly a witness telling an authority figure about an incident). The first is slightly more crafted (possibly a novelist building out a vignette).







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