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I want to know if this sentence needs a question mark to be grammatically correct:



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    I the point of the sentence is to ask what the secret was that John was asked, you would remove the comma and replace the period with a question mark: What was the secret [that] John was asked? If the point of the sentence is relay a bit of a conversation in which someone asked John what the secret was—and if the writer wanted to use a passive construction for some reason, you could add change the comma to a question mark and add quotation marks around the question: "What was the secret?" John was asked. ...
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    ... If the point is merely to paraphrase the actual question asked of John, you could rephrase the sentence as a question-mark-less statement: John was asked what the secret was.
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    I the point of the sentence is to ask what the secret was that John was asked, you would remove the comma and replace the period with a question mark: What was the secret [that] John was asked? If the point of the sentence is relay a bit of a conversation in which someone asked John what the secret was—and if the writer wanted to use a passive construction for some reason, you could add change the comma to a question mark and add quotation marks around the question: "What was the secret?" John was asked. ...
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    ... If the point is merely to paraphrase the actual question asked of John, you could rephrase the sentence as a question-mark-less statement: John was asked what the secret was.
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    I the point of the sentence is to ask what the secret was that John was asked, you would remove the comma and replace the period with a question mark: What was the secret [that] John was asked? If the point of the sentence is relay a bit of a conversation in which someone asked John what the secret was—and if the writer wanted to use a passive construction for some reason, you could add change the comma to a question mark and add quotation marks around the question: "What was the secret?" John was asked. ...
    – Sven Yargs
    Nov 22 at 22:27






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    ... If the point is merely to paraphrase the actual question asked of John, you could rephrase the sentence as a question-mark-less statement: John was asked what the secret was.
    – Sven Yargs
    Nov 22 at 22:27














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    I the point of the sentence is to ask what the secret was that John was asked, you would remove the comma and replace the period with a question mark: What was the secret [that] John was asked? If the point of the sentence is relay a bit of a conversation in which someone asked John what the secret was—and if the writer wanted to use a passive construction for some reason, you could add change the comma to a question mark and add quotation marks around the question: "What was the secret?" John was asked. ...
    – Sven Yargs
    Nov 22 at 22:27






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    ... If the point is merely to paraphrase the actual question asked of John, you could rephrase the sentence as a question-mark-less statement: John was asked what the secret was.
    – Sven Yargs
    Nov 22 at 22:27








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I the point of the sentence is to ask what the secret was that John was asked, you would remove the comma and replace the period with a question mark: What was the secret [that] John was asked? If the point of the sentence is relay a bit of a conversation in which someone asked John what the secret was—and if the writer wanted to use a passive construction for some reason, you could add change the comma to a question mark and add quotation marks around the question: "What was the secret?" John was asked. ...
– Sven Yargs
Nov 22 at 22:27




I the point of the sentence is to ask what the secret was that John was asked, you would remove the comma and replace the period with a question mark: What was the secret [that] John was asked? If the point of the sentence is relay a bit of a conversation in which someone asked John what the secret was—and if the writer wanted to use a passive construction for some reason, you could add change the comma to a question mark and add quotation marks around the question: "What was the secret?" John was asked. ...
– Sven Yargs
Nov 22 at 22:27




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... If the point is merely to paraphrase the actual question asked of John, you could rephrase the sentence as a question-mark-less statement: John was asked what the secret was.
– Sven Yargs
Nov 22 at 22:27




... If the point is merely to paraphrase the actual question asked of John, you could rephrase the sentence as a question-mark-less statement: John was asked what the secret was.
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Antiquely, severely, one can write,




What was the secret? John was asked.




The question mark takes the place of the omitted comma.



Modern readers probably won't expect that, though. Even antiquely, it's a problem because John's name is capitalized.



I like the way you write it:




What was the secret, John was asked.




The stylistic logic is imperfect but, actually, it works.



Some others have suggested alternatives in the comments. As I said, I prefer yours.





If your context liked quotation marks (I assume from your question that it does not), then, of course,




"What was the secret?" John was asked.




And if you wished to try alternative word ordering,




"What," John was asked, "was the secret?"




In fact, that even almost works without the quote markes, doesn't it?




What, John was asked, was the secret?




But these later attempts stray from your question.






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    Antiquely, severely, one can write,




    What was the secret? John was asked.




    The question mark takes the place of the omitted comma.



    Modern readers probably won't expect that, though. Even antiquely, it's a problem because John's name is capitalized.



    I like the way you write it:




    What was the secret, John was asked.




    The stylistic logic is imperfect but, actually, it works.



    Some others have suggested alternatives in the comments. As I said, I prefer yours.





    If your context liked quotation marks (I assume from your question that it does not), then, of course,




    "What was the secret?" John was asked.




    And if you wished to try alternative word ordering,




    "What," John was asked, "was the secret?"




    In fact, that even almost works without the quote markes, doesn't it?




    What, John was asked, was the secret?




    But these later attempts stray from your question.






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      Antiquely, severely, one can write,




      What was the secret? John was asked.




      The question mark takes the place of the omitted comma.



      Modern readers probably won't expect that, though. Even antiquely, it's a problem because John's name is capitalized.



      I like the way you write it:




      What was the secret, John was asked.




      The stylistic logic is imperfect but, actually, it works.



      Some others have suggested alternatives in the comments. As I said, I prefer yours.





      If your context liked quotation marks (I assume from your question that it does not), then, of course,




      "What was the secret?" John was asked.




      And if you wished to try alternative word ordering,




      "What," John was asked, "was the secret?"




      In fact, that even almost works without the quote markes, doesn't it?




      What, John was asked, was the secret?




      But these later attempts stray from your question.






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        Antiquely, severely, one can write,




        What was the secret? John was asked.




        The question mark takes the place of the omitted comma.



        Modern readers probably won't expect that, though. Even antiquely, it's a problem because John's name is capitalized.



        I like the way you write it:




        What was the secret, John was asked.




        The stylistic logic is imperfect but, actually, it works.



        Some others have suggested alternatives in the comments. As I said, I prefer yours.





        If your context liked quotation marks (I assume from your question that it does not), then, of course,




        "What was the secret?" John was asked.




        And if you wished to try alternative word ordering,




        "What," John was asked, "was the secret?"




        In fact, that even almost works without the quote markes, doesn't it?




        What, John was asked, was the secret?




        But these later attempts stray from your question.






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        Antiquely, severely, one can write,




        What was the secret? John was asked.




        The question mark takes the place of the omitted comma.



        Modern readers probably won't expect that, though. Even antiquely, it's a problem because John's name is capitalized.



        I like the way you write it:




        What was the secret, John was asked.




        The stylistic logic is imperfect but, actually, it works.



        Some others have suggested alternatives in the comments. As I said, I prefer yours.





        If your context liked quotation marks (I assume from your question that it does not), then, of course,




        "What was the secret?" John was asked.




        And if you wished to try alternative word ordering,




        "What," John was asked, "was the secret?"




        In fact, that even almost works without the quote markes, doesn't it?




        What, John was asked, was the secret?




        But these later attempts stray from your question.







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